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Mastering First Page Critiques – The 5 Don’ts with Henry McLaughlin
ByChris & Gena Maselli October 23, 2024October 26, 2024 Reading Time: 12 minutes

Join Christopher Maselli and Gena Maselli, along with author Henry McLaughlin as Henry delves into the importance of manuscript critiques, offering valuable advice on giving and receiving feedback, and best practices for submitting your work.

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First Page Critiques
ByHenry McLaughlin October 1, 2024September 17, 2024 Reading Time: 1 minute

Today, I’m sharing the first page of a story from a brave author, who shall remain anonymous. Thank you, bold author, for taking a risk to seek feedback on your story. The story is set in 1970 and describes a soldier returning from Vietnam. What follows is the original as submitted. My critique follows. Lastly,…

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